Hanna - Styna Laas

[mimmy]

Full Name: Hanna - Styna Laas
Age: 14
Gender: female
Riding Level: advanced
Appearance: Long blond hair . Naturally , she has (or had) little bit darker , like caramel colour hair , but she didn't like it. She has those medium sized eyes , what are glowing. That dark green eye colour , that shines to you. Hanna isn't very tall , only 5.6 hands . Her skin is pretty light , sun isn't taking her. In the center , of the face , lays sprinkels(orsmt). Those little spots has conquered her face . She is pretty slim and sporty .
General Personality: Hanna is pretty mean. She doesn't have that ability , to communicate with people. But she doesn't care. She has her horse . There aren't many people , who want to be friends with her. And in deep down inside her , it makes her sad . She has tried , to change her , but nothing. She has decaid to try to be nicer to people .
History: Hanna was born at Estonia , a little country next to Russia . But her parents didn't like Estonia , so they moved to England . When she got 3 , she discovered the horses . When other children run and play all the summer , she was taking care of her pony , Winnie The Pooh . That pony was in deep down heart . Even school couldn't divorce them . But Hanna grew up and she had to leave her pony . Now , Winnie is resting in the meadows and Hanna discovered a new love for her .

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Preferred Name: umm , MIMMY i guess ;'D
Role Play Experience: 2 years
Other Characters: -

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I haven't accepted this for two reasons:

First, it could use some more details.

For instance, what exactly do you mean by "Hannah is pretty mean"? Do you mean she takes pleasure in putting down others? Is she a bully? Or is she just anti-social.
Another thing is her history. You say her parents moved from Estonia because they didn't like it, but you don't say why they don't like it. You also don't say anything about her coming to America.

Also, you're missing a clue that proves you've read the rules.

Fix those things, please? Thanks :][/center]